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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
Don't rush, take your time.
If you are stuck, take a break, just don't rush it out the door.
As for the piece itself... It's a bit to vibrant and pops a bit too much for my personal taste, but that has no reflection on its quality. The models are great... Reminds me of a bots flying through a jungle. What might be a problem is the difference between the leaf render and the tikki-like abstract model on the left. The leaf texture is near-realistic, while the other jungle shapes are almost vector-like. It's a bit jarring, I think... If you feel like playing more with it, trying making the leaf textures a bit less detailed and more vector-like. See if that does anything for ya.
once again you're right with the crits I believe. I had struggled with that already, but I kind of forget about it as I went on with image. I now deleted that whole section and added a sky graydient, it looks better, but I am still not completely happy. Will have to work it some more I guess