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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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just my 2 cents, still overall a great peice!
Not sure if this is it, but... One thing that's a bit jarring is the difference between the painted and "torn" vector-like styles. It works well in some areas, like the body tones... But it looks like it clashes a bit on the more defined lines of the painted parts. Namely the hair. I think if the hair had more of an edge to it it might blend better as a piece.
If you're gonna keep working on this one, try sharpening up the hair a bit with some paths. Either sporadic overlays or a complete vector reconstruction of the hair. Might not fix it and you might not even like the result, but it's worth a shot if you have the time to experiment.
the whole transparent hair thing gives it a kind of amature look. I didn't even see it that way yet. I should have spend more time on that.
I think I'm gonna consider this one a sketch, just like Part II. I was already busy with the next one. I'm gonna see if I can incorperate the ideas out of these two, into that one.
thanx for the feedback
I look forward to seeing you play with the ideas on the other piece. That's one fun thing about conceptual pieces like this; the freedom to learn from them. It's much harder to experiment when you have a clear direction for a piece, particularly if it's non-abstract.